I read the first in series “Pancake…” and enjoyed it, as well as the second. I figured out very quickly what was up in both books but still enjoyed the process, the characters and their stories. It felt as if there was a bit more character depth and spiritual depth in this book There were some very small details that were incorrect, but if you didn’t know better (or even if you do) it doesn’t detract from the telling or the enjoyment. Writing is hard and I admire and greatly appreciate the fruits of authors’ labors! Blessings on your endeavors, Keri!